Good use pictures, it really creates thought around your point. Good use of persuasive fonts which is really eye catching. You haven’t used enough background info to your point And especially you need to Say what about south Auckland you a promoting.
It looks cool how he sticks with his theme and how he put all off his idea’s in it.
ReplyDeleteJust too much graffiti and it makes it look like south Auckland’s a trouble town.
Good use pictures, it really creates thought around your point. Good use of persuasive fonts which is really eye catching.
ReplyDeleteYou haven’t used enough background info to your point
And especially you need to
Say what about south Auckland you a promoting.